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Post by virtualpsycho on Sun 11 Sep - 23:39

Any crits are welcome....



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Re: New Cartoon - Building Site

Post by Simon Lake on Mon 12 Sep - 17:28

Different.

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Re: New Cartoon - Building Site

Post by virtualpsycho on Mon 12 Sep - 20:45

It's a bit weird but I was trying a warped visual gag... don't know if I pulled it off though.

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Re: New Cartoon - Building Site

Post by Simon Lake on Mon 12 Sep - 21:02

Almost like The Far Side Gary Lawson good direction keep it up.

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Re: New Cartoon - Building Site

Post by Simon Lake on Mon 12 Sep - 21:29

I don't exactly get the gag but the economy of line is good.

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Re: New Cartoon - Building Site

Post by virtualpsycho on Mon 12 Sep - 22:00

"Buliding Site" - a building in the shape of large glasses used for sight...

I probably need to work on my composition and communication a bit more.

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Re: New Cartoon - Building Site

Post by Leah-Admin on Mon 12 Sep - 22:07

ah hhhhhhhaaaaaaaaa, now I 'see' it Wink

I think what is required here would be a cartoon man in a hard hat, perhaps on the glasses, doing 'building' work, maybe some scaffolding etc.

Meanwhile I also like the perspective..unusual.

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Re: New Cartoon - Building Site

Post by Simon Lake on Mon 12 Sep - 22:11

They maybe look a bit more like a pair of shades?

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Re: New Cartoon - Building Site

Post by virtualpsycho on Mon 12 Sep - 22:32

Cheers.

Absolutely to all points, will have to revise it. Back to it.

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