Please review and critique my site!!

[funmunch01]

Hello Everyone,

Please review my new site ecards.funmunch.com. We have come up with thousands of attractive and funny free e-cards. These e-cards are designed to help you in expressing your thoughts to your near and dear one. We design e-cards and greeting cards for all occasions including friendship day, holidays, birth day, love and so on.

Please review this site!!

Thanks

[Leah-Admin]

The site is very attractive but the English isn't good on it, that could do with correction.

[Andries]

Looks pretty and stuff, but loading times are really long (when loading the page, and when pressing the 'next' button)
Maybe your images have a too large filesize?

I get an error:
'Warning: file_get_contents() [function.file-get-contents]: Couldn't resolve host name in /home/ecardsfm/public_html/index.html on line 104

Warning: file_get_contents(http://www.funmunch.com/base/top.html?funmunch_head_cat=ecards&funmunch_head_text=) [function.file-get-contents]: failed to open stream: operation failed in /home/ecardsfm/public_html/index.html on line 104'